tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post8567872010970772100..comments2023-10-16T07:40:08.055-05:00Comments on Jan Morrill's Thoughts Over Coffee: "Forbidden" #FridayFlash, #FridayFictioneers, #100wordsJan Morrillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15600019541133998696noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-58537777785332517962011-10-03T16:44:50.491-05:002011-10-03T16:44:50.491-05:00@Jack LaBloom, thank you! I've enjoyed making ...@Jack LaBloom, thank you! I've enjoyed making stories from a picture for as long as I can remember. You need to join our Friday Fictioneers!Jan Morrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15600019541133998696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-86907155237411873012011-10-03T16:10:22.376-05:002011-10-03T16:10:22.376-05:00That is beautiful, Jan. Your ability to see a grea...That is beautiful, Jan. Your ability to see a great story unfold from a photo and translate your vision into prose is pure genius. Thank you for sharing your insight with us.Jack LaBloomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09686754263756099178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-74076385607108677842011-10-01T19:29:51.635-05:002011-10-01T19:29:51.635-05:00Thanks for trying again, Madison! I made a couple ...Thanks for trying again, Madison! I made a couple of changes, and I was hoping that worked. I look forward to Fridays, thanks to your Flash Fiction Friday. Have a good weekend!Jan Morrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15600019541133998696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-62486231564297891742011-10-01T18:44:15.474-05:002011-10-01T18:44:15.474-05:00whoo-hoo! It worked :)whoo-hoo! It worked :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-89404506703790638222011-10-01T18:43:46.339-05:002011-10-01T18:43:46.339-05:00Hi Jan, I'm going to try to leave a comment ag...Hi Jan, I'm going to try to leave a comment again ;) My feet are crossed under the table for good luck.<br /><br />I loved your story about the dark angel - it's a take on the feather I didn't even consider. Thanks for being a great FridayFictioneer founding member :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-15804640981612875682011-09-30T19:50:47.431-05:002011-09-30T19:50:47.431-05:00My thoughts are long the same lines as KD's: b...My thoughts are long the same lines as KD's: bittersweet loveliness. :)Tiyana Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11022663279469468201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-86472145806488651602011-09-30T16:01:24.420-05:002011-09-30T16:01:24.420-05:00Nice! I really like the angel part.Nice! I really like the angel part.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-90092973189097478032011-09-30T12:49:25.923-05:002011-09-30T12:49:25.923-05:00Favorite line: "In the summer, the creek, lik...Favorite line: "In the summer, the creek, like my tears, will dry". Great!<br /><br />http://kbnelson.wordpress.comKaren Nelsonhttp://kbnelson.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-71406520617031856502011-09-30T12:13:27.796-05:002011-09-30T12:13:27.796-05:00Nicely done! I'm yearning right there with you...Nicely done! I'm yearning right there with your MC! :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-83634597414550485482011-09-30T12:07:54.315-05:002011-09-30T12:07:54.315-05:00Wow Jan. I love this story! The ending totally gra...Wow Jan. I love this story! The ending totally grabbed me! The writing is so amazing - hard to believe it was only 100 words! Well done...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-1882496502827378512011-09-30T10:07:29.927-05:002011-09-30T10:07:29.927-05:00@Russell - thank you. That's one thing I like ...@Russell - thank you. That's one thing I like about flash fiction - it leaves a lot to the imagination. :)<br /><br />@K.D. McCrite - that means a lot, coming from such a wonderful writer as you. Thanks!Jan Morrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15600019541133998696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-60226103882524486772011-09-30T09:25:54.812-05:002011-09-30T09:25:54.812-05:00Jan, you are a great writer. This is sweet, bitter...Jan, you are a great writer. This is sweet, bittersweet, and lovely.K.D. McCritehttp://www.kdmccrite.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4214358078220293316.post-17215384321177599542011-09-30T08:49:26.651-05:002011-09-30T08:49:26.651-05:00Very nice. Leaves a lot to the imagination. I like...Very nice. Leaves a lot to the imagination. I like that.Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02951989303915273807noreply@blogger.com